An iamb is a rhythmic unit that includes an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed one. It has the rhythm bah-BAH
Examples would include: a-bout, suc-comb, di-stress.
The best advice I can give you about writing any kind of poetry, is to read other poems in the same style aloud. it is then you will begin to develop an ear for poetry, for pentameter or rhyme scheme. Historically, poetry was an oral tradition, and although you will feel like you are talking to yourself, it is the best way to hear musical quality of the poem.
Kenneth A O'Shaughnessy was born in Syracuse, NY, and has lived in the Greenville, SC for slightly over half of his life. Ken also writes books for children. You can purchase the picture book he made with his son, The Boy with the Pig Nose, from http://www.amazon.com/Kenneth-OShaughnessy/e/B008HPMJKE/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1?qid=1359693139&sr=8-1
The Way You Move
Of all the little loving things
you do
Just because I am the one
you adore
The one I like best is one
that is new
It's the way you move when
you sweep the floor
Angel's wings could not any
better brush
The clouds of Heaven from
whence they watch you
Than you can the floor with
bristles of rush
And since you are here I get
to watch too
You are still using the same
old whisk broom
And you're still sweeping
the same kitchen tile
But now I like to watch you
leave the room
For the first time in a very
long while
I've come to enjoy your wiggling
hips
The little whistle they
bring to my lips
Laurie Epps is a non-fiction author,
essayist, editor, and poet living in Anderson, South Carolina. A seeker of beauty, her
is dream is to travel the world one day and tell their many stories. To read
more of Laurie's stories visit her Tuesday column dedicated to writing at: http://thewriteconversation.blogspot.com
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